錯
1. Speak more loudly, and you won’t be heard by others.
2. Write quickly, and you won’t finish the composition in time.
3. Work hard, or you will pass the English examination.
4. Read one more, or you will catch the meaning.
5. Admitting your faults, or you will be punished.
6. Read philosophy books, and you will be benefit from them
sooner or later.
7. Think it over, or you will find the solution to the problem.
8. Do the morning exercise, and you will benefit in it.
9. Work hard, and you will successful one day.
10. Write neatly and clearly, or you will give your teacher a
good impression.
【參考答案】
1. and—or 2. and—or 3. or—and 4. or—and 5. Admitting—Admit
6. be去掉 7. or—and 8. in—from 9. will—will be 10. or—and
第四步:偉人偉招
1. 向前看,向右看式
Life can only be understood backwards, but it must be lived forwards. (Kierkegaard )
隻有向後看才能理解生活;但要生活好,則必須向前看。(克爾凱郭爾)
【點評】寫四級文章時,這句話用來在原因段和解決問題段之間承上啟下,確是個完美的選擇。
2. 匹夫有責式
No man is useless in this world who lightens the burden of someone else.
(C. Dickens )
在這個世界上能為別人減輕負擔的人都是有用的。(狄更斯)
【點評】該句用來論述個人應該為社會減負的問題時,可謂是恰到好處。
第五步:實踐與進步
將下麵的句子補完整
1. Why are …? For one thing, … For another, …
2. Another reason why I dispute the above statement is that…
3. It gives rise to a host of problems .
4. There are numerous reasons why…, and I shall explore here only a few of the most important ones.
5. It will exert profound influence on…
6. A multitude of factors could account for the change in…
7. In 1999, it increased from 5 to 10 percent of the total .
8. By comparison with 1998, it decreased from 10 to 5 percent .
9. … account(s) for 15 percent of the total.