改進: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改進: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改進: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
改進: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
50. I felt alone.
改進: I felt lonely.
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The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.
Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.
Furthermore, ______________.
In short,_________________複述前文中的理由______________.
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____________改寫並複述題目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.