高考作文輔導——如何寫開放作文
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寫作練習
請結合下麵的材料，按要求用英文寫作，詞數不少於100。
“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”
—Thomas Edison
1 針對名言發表你的感想；
2 應緊扣材料，有明確的觀點。
【參考範文1】
What Thomas Edison said suggests that it is not inspiration but hard work that leads to success. Some people think that many famous people have succeeded just because they were born with special talents. Actually， their success comes from hard work.
Take Thomas Edison for example. Though he studied in school for only three months because of poverty， he taught himself and learned a lot. He made more than 2，000 inventions in his life， some of which have greatly improved our life. While inventing the light bulb， Thomas Edison had tried more than 1，600 materials and failed， but he didn’t give up easily. It was his persistence and hard work that led to his final success. He set a good example to us all.
It is clear that hard work leads to success. If you are to make great contributions to society， you have to keep on trying until you succeed.
【範文剖析】
1.範文共分三個段落：第一段談了自己對寫作素材，即愛迪生名言的理解，並亮明自己的觀點——“成功不是靠特異功能，而是努力的結果”；第二段舉例證明自己的觀點。用美國著名發明家愛迪生做出眾多發明的例子，說明他的成功源自其堅持不懈的努力；最後一段為結論段，總結前文，並得出結論：努力才能成功。如果你想有所做作為，就要刻苦努力。
2.第二段用Take Thomas Edison for example一句作為過渡語，使上下文巧妙地連接起來。愛迪生的例子恰恰證明了他的成功不是因為他是天才，而是一步一個腳印踏實工作的結果。本段的舉例恰如其分地證明了第一段的論點。